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The graph below compares the number of people using dine-in services and delivery services in 5 different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares the number of people using dine-in services and delivery services in 5 different years. gbNM3
The bar chart differentiate, how many individuals are utilizing dine-in and delivery services for a period of time. Overall, delivery service subtantially increased from intial to end of the year. However, dine-in services are high in starting years, by the time it reaches the last years the customers decreased gradually. Firstly, it is quite evident that more customers are using din-in service than the delivery service from the year 2000 to 2005, because the delivery services are limited and technology is still developing during these years. Around, 5 thousand members are using delivery service, and 80 thousand juveniles are choosing dine-in service. Moreover, this trend continued to increase in delivery service and decreased in dine-in service for next 5 years. Particularly, in 2010 to 2020 delivery services hiked owing to this a huge number of people utilized this service. Over, 125 thousand members are choosed delivery service and only 7 persons are taking dine-in service.
The bar chart differentiate, how
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individuals are utilizing dine-in and
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delivery
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services
for a period of time.
Overall
,
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delivery
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service
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subtantially
increased from
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intial
to
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end
of the
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year
.
However
, dine-in
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services
are high in starting years, by the time it reaches the last years the customers decreased
gradually
.

Firstly
, it is quite evident that more customers are using din-in
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service
than the
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delivery
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service
from the
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year
2000 to 2005,
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because
the
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delivery
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services
are limited
and technology is
still
developing during these years. Around, 5 thousand members are using
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delivery
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service
, and 80 thousand juveniles are choosing dine-in
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service
.
Moreover
, this trend continued to increase in
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delivery
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service
and decreased in dine-in
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service
for
next
5 years.

Particularly
, in 2010 to 2020
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delivery
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services
hiked owing to this a huge number of
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people
utilized this
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service
. Over, 125 thousand members are
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choosed
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and
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only
7 persons are taking dine-in
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IELTS academic The graph below compares the number of people using dine-in services and delivery services in 5 different years.

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