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Marriages and divorces cases happening UK from 1956 to 2006 . Marriages further categories in first marriage and Remarriage

Marriages and divorces cases happening UK from 1956 to 2006. Marriages further categories in first marriage and Remarriage oRR3V
The line graph illustrates the quantity of marriage and divorces cases registered in Britain in between 1956 to 2006. Marriage has to more streams. First marriage and Remarriage. Overall, it is that clear that all marriage is at top from beginning to end whereas divorces and Remarriage at the bottom line thought the period. In details, all marriage category started the journey with 400 and after that, it has a repaid increase in vales till 1956(425). the lowest point was 280 in the year 2006. When comes to first marriage, it is almost following the same pattern of the first one category. Beginning with 325 at top just below all marriages. The number shown a rapid hike help them to touch 350 mark. After that throughout the years it continuously decreasing and reached to 190 in 2006. On the other hand, divorces and Remarriages were not very popular in 1950s with 25 and 50 respectively. The major flucation started in vales begin in mid 1970's. From that moment, Remarriage seqment have followed a stable line in the growth whereas in divorce cases the number changing in regular basis. At the end of the period divorces cases arrived at 125 and Remarriage to 100.
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and
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cases registered in Britain in
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between 1956 to 2006
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Marriage
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has to
more streams.
First
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marriage
and Remarriage.
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, it is that
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clear
that all
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marriage
is at top from beginning to
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end
whereas
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divorces
and Remarriage at the bottom line
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thought
the period. In
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details
, all
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marriage
category
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started
the journey with 400 and after that, it has a repaid increase in vales till 1956(425).
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the
lowest point was 280 in the year 2006. When
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to
first
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marriage
, it is almost following the same pattern of the
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one category. Beginning with 325 at top
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just
below all
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marriages
. The number shown a rapid hike
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help
them to touch 350 mark. After that throughout the years it
continuously
decreasing and reached to 190 in 2006.
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,
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divorces
and Remarriages were not
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very
popular
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in 1950s
with 25 and 50
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. The major
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in vales
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in mid
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1970's
. From that moment, Remarriage
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seqment
have followed a stable line in the growth whereas in
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divorce
cases the number changing in regular basis. At the
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end
of the period
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divorces
cases arrived at 125 and Remarriage to 100.
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IELTS academic Marriages and divorces cases happening UK from 1956 to 2006. Marriages further categories in first marriage and Remarriage

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