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The graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The line graph demonstrates the course of temperatures according to a particular month for three major metropolises. Also, the table shows how many hours of sunlight were in each city on an average per year. The capital of Australia, Sydney, starts the year at little more than 25 degrees and then the temperature starts slightly to decrease. In the middle of July, a slow increase can be seen. London and New York follow a similar pattern. First, temperatures remain on the lower point. It is clear that the more daylight in the month, the higher it gets. The higher point of both cities (London and New York) is reached around the middle of July. Temperatures then start to diminish and goon till the end of the year. To compare, for Sydney temperatures the pattern was contrary. According to the given table, the highest amount of sunshine hours per year gets New York with more than 2. 500 annual hours of sunshine and the most cloudy city is London, which gets around 1. 100 hours.
The line graph demonstrates the course of
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according to a particular month for three major metropolises.
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, the table
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shows
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many
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hours
of sunlight were in each city on an average per
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year
. The capital of Australia, Sydney,
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the
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more than 25 degrees and then the
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temperature
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starts
slightly
to decrease. In the middle of July, a slow increase can be
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. London and New York follow a similar pattern.
First
,
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temperatures
remain on the lower point. It is
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clear
that the more daylight in the month, the higher it
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. The higher point of both cities (London and New York)
is reached
around the middle of July.
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Temperatures
then
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start
to diminish and goon till the
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end
of the
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year
. To compare, for Sydney
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temperatures
the pattern was contrary. According to the
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table, the highest amount of sunshine
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hours
per
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year
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gets
New York with more than 2. 500 annual
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hours
of sunshine and the most cloudy city is London, which
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gets
around 1. 100
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hours
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IELTS academic The graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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