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The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.you should write at least 150 words.

The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. ABbEl
The line graph illustrates date regarding worldwide usage of water and table chart revels figure of water consumption in two individual countries according to their population. Overall, in year 1900, water usage by agriculture sector was slightly higher than industrial and domestic sector and at the end of the period agriculture sector at peak. Water consumption in Brazil is much higher than Congo. Firstly regard the line graph. Throughout the century water usage by agriculture area was increse significantly and reached at highest point at 3000km in year 2000. in 1900 usage of water in industrial and domestic sector were same which is 100km but over the period this amount was rise slightly over 1000km and 300km respectively. Turning to table chart water consumption was compared between Brazil and Congo. population of Brazil was 176millions which was higher then Congo even irrigated land of Brazil was 26500km also greater than Congo. furthemore water consumption per person in Congo was 8millions when this amount were bigger in Brazil which is 356millions.
The line graph illustrates date regarding worldwide
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and table chart revels figure of
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water
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consumption
in two individual countries according to their population.
Overall
, in year 1900,
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usage
by agriculture
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sector
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at peak.
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Water
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in Brazil is much higher than Congo.
Firstly
regard the line graph. Throughout the century
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by agriculture area was
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increse
significantly
and reached at highest point at
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3000km
in year 2000.
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in
1900
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in industrial and domestic
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were same which is
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100km
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over
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1000km
and
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300km
respectively
. Turning to table chart
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was compared
between Brazil and Congo.
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population
of Brazil was 176millions which was
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higher then
Congo even irrigated land of Brazil was
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26500km
also
greater than Congo.
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furthemore
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per person in Congo was 8millions when this amount were bigger in Brazil which is 356millions.
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IELTS academic The graph and table give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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