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most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008

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The graphical representation, illustrates the concerns of people related to healthcare services, Education & training and air pollution, in cities of Birmingham, London, New Castle and other few more, in the year 2008. It is quite clear from the given data that the residents of Birmingham are the most worried about the health services, in their city. On the other hand, people of Manchester are maximally concerned about the air pollution. There is a minor difference between Education & training and health services related worries, to the people of London. The people of a New castle are least bothered about the air pollution in their city. It can be observed from the bar chart that the education and training issues raised in Glasgow and London are similar in number. Likewise; the people of Glasgow and Birmingham have issues of air pollution. On the contrary, only 10% of people in Glasgow are concerned about the air pollution.
The graphical representation, illustrates the concerns of
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related to healthcare services, Education & training and
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pollution
, in cities of Birmingham, London, New Castle and other few more, in the year 2008.

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data that the residents of Birmingham are the most worried about the health services, in their city.
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of Manchester are
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pollution
. There is a minor difference between Education & training and health services related worries, to the
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people
of London. The
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of a New castle are least bothered about the
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air
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pollution
in their city.

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from the bar chart that the education and training issues raised in Glasgow and London are similar in number.
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of Glasgow and Birmingham have issues of
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in Glasgow
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