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The graph shows how to develop new products. I guess the most important part is concept design. Concept design can determine hole of the product. Imagine the effect of COVID-19. That big accident rotated the world in to the chaos flow. People can no longer work with like before COVID-19. The company is now struggling with how to grab the profit in those society. Company should notice the importance of concept design. when the product fill the people's need and have a good concept, the product will conquest the world immediately. For instance, iPhone was the kind of tools. The great concept is must if you want to sell new things. OK, I want to refer to the development. Try and Error is key word here. Reverse Engineering dose. Do you know one of the largest motor company, TOYOTA TOYOTA has a long history, and they always attempted try and error
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how to develop new products.

I guess the most
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Concept design can determine hole of the product. Imagine the effect of COVID-19.

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accident rotated the world in to the chaos flow.

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struggling with how to grab the profit in
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's need and have a
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good
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, the product will conquest the world immediately.

For instance
, iPhone was the kind of tools.

The great
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concept
is
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must
if you want to sell new things.

OK, I want to refer to the development.

"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
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Error is key word here. Reverse Engineering dose.

Do you know one of the largest motor
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, TOYOTA

TOYOTA has a long history, and they always attempted
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150 words
6.0
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