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Accessing the news in Australia and Canada

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This pie charts depicts getting to the news for both Australia and Canada, it's clear from the graph that both of them used internet in a highly proportion. According to what is shown, Australia used the online to access the news for 52%, the second high percentage was the tv with 37%, the third was the printer, and finally the last two parts were radio and another thing that non-selcted with the same rate which is 2% of both While, Canada used 40% to see the news through tv which is risly more than Australia for useing the tv, second part was the online with 36%, therfore they used the printer for 14%, after that the radio, and last but not least the non-selected with 3% To sum up, we could say that the diffrence between the two countries that they used their highly percentage on different things, but the other sections is nearly to each other

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clear
 from the graph that both of them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 internet in a You used an adverb ('highly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('proportion') instead of another adjective.
highly proportion
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According to what is shown
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 with 37%, the third was the printer, and finally
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 with the same rate which is 2% of both

While, Canada This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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see
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 more than Australia for Possible spelling mistake found.using
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 the Possible spelling mistake found.TVtoMTVCTVTTUV
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, second part was the online with 36%, Possible spelling mistake found.therefore
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 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the printer for 14%, after that the radio, and last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least the non-selected with 3%

To sum up, we could say that the Possible spelling mistake found.difference
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 between the two countries that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 their highly
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different
 things, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the other sections is nearly
 to each other