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Top honeymoon destination

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The given chart shows the information about the number of honeymooners who chose a destination among the top eight honeymoon venues in British in 2010. Overall Thailand was the most popular destination for newlywed couples, while the bottom of the list was The lake district. Thailand was the number-one destination, with 1410 couples choosing this, making it slight more popular than Bali, at 1335 couples. The third popular venue was Costa Rica, with 750 couples spending their honeymoon there, which was around one third higher than the number of newlywed couples coming The Greek Islands, at 432. Paris was next at 209, while Spain was slightly less popular at 140 couples. And this was followed by The Lake district, at 124.

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IELTS academic Top honeymoon destination

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American English

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