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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. bl7B
The data provides the information of average temperature and annual hours of sunshine in london, new york and sydney. New york and London has similar temperature whereas sydney has a warm temperature of 27degree celsius in january. The temperature in new york and london increases from the start of april. The temperature in sydney slightly decreases in july. The total annual hours of sunshine for london, new york and sydney are 1, 180, 2, 535 and 2, 473. New york has the total number of hours of sunshine per year. Sydney’s lowest temperature is about 15 in july. New york has the hottest weather of 30 degree celsius. Therefore london is the coldest city and has lower sunshine hours. New York has more hottest summers while sydney has moderate temperature.
The data provides the information of average
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london
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IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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