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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. bllP
The given pie charts give the information on the yearly spent by a particular school in United kingdom in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Overall, a very large majority on total spending of schools was allocated for salaries of the teachers in three decades, however, the insurance got a very small number in those years. Based on the pie chart, In the year 1981, 40% of total spending used for teacher’s salaries and 10% was added in year 1991 and after 10 years salaries dropped by 5% in year 2001. Resources such as books in year 1981 and 1991 covers almost 15% and 29% respectively, and by year 2001 it was reduced by 9%. A total spending fluctuates by 15%, 5% and 23% chronologically, consumed for Furniture and equipments. Likewise, Insurance rose from 2% in year 1981 followed by 3% in 1991 then finally in year 2001 it was increased by 8%. Schools spent most a lot for their expenditure for Teachers’ salaries.
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in 1981, 1991, and 2001.

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large majority on total spending of schools
was allocated
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salaries
of the teachers in three decades,
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, the insurance
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number in those years.

Based on the pie chart, In the
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1981, 40% of total spending
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used
for teacher’s
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salaries
and 10% was
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in
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1991 and after 10 years
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salaries
dropped by 5% in
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year
2001. Resources such as books in
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1981 and 1991 covers almost 15% and 29%
respectively
, and by
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2001 it was
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reduced
by 9%. A total spending fluctuates by 15%, 5% and 23%
chronologically
, consumed for Furniture and equipments.

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, Insurance rose from 2% in
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1981 followed by 3% in 1991 then
finally
in
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2001 it
was increased
by 8%. Schools spent most a lot for their expenditure for Teachers’
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salaries
.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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