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The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. REEM
The given chart provide information about the results of people’s preferences between buying fresh coffee, instant coffee or going to cafè to have tea or coffee in five different Australian towns. Overall, it is clear that residents of the five cities, expect from one, prefer going to shop to have a drink rather than buy a fresh or instant one. In addition, people from all the five cities are more into buy instant coffe than the fresh one. First of all, the first result worth pointing out is the rate of going to a shop in Melbourne and Hobart that receives approximately 63%, followed by Sydney at 61%. An exception of the trend is the review reported in Adelaide as the habit to have instant coffee than going to café is higher for just 1%, at rate of 50% and 49% respectively. Furthermore, comparing the percentages of instant and fresh coffee, in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, the values of the instant drink are more or less double than the fresh drink. The gaps between the categories are 34%, 31% and 325 respectively. the slightest difference have been reported in Sydeney, 2%.
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chart provide information about the results of
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people
’s preferences between buying
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fresh
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coffee
, instant
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coffee
or going to
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cafè
to have tea or
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coffee
in five
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different
Australian towns.

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, it is
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clear
that residents of the five cities,
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expect
from one, prefer going to shop to have a drink
rather
than
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buy
a
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fresh
or instant one.
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,
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people
from all the five cities are more into
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buy
instant
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coffe
than the
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fresh
one.

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First of all
, the
first
result worth pointing out is the rate of going to a shop in Melbourne and Hobart that receives approximately 63%, followed by Sydney at 61%. An
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exception of
the trend is the review reported in Adelaide as the habit to have instant
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coffee
than going to café is higher for
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just
1%, at rate of 50% and 49%
respectively
.

Furthermore
, comparing the percentages of instant and
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fresh
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coffee
, in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, the values of the instant drink are more or less double than the
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fresh
drink. The gaps between the categories are 34%, 31% and 325
respectively
.
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the
slightest difference have
been reported
in
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Sydeney
, 2%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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