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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. rqqm
The graph illustrates the amount of products moved by road, water, rail and pipeline within the uk from 1974 to 2002. Overall, road was the most used method of transportation in the uk, whereas the one that carried the least tonnages was pipeline. In addition, the three ways, road, water and pipeline experienced increases of good while rail, even if it had some slight variation at the end of the period reached the same amount of year 1974. First of all, The first result worth pointing out is the rise of about 30 million tonnes over the period. This type of transportation had a significant upward trend from 1995 to 1998, and then it continued with a gradual increase. On the other hand, pipeline, beginning with less than 10 million goods, gradually grew, until it reached 22million tonnes, as from that quantities remained stable to the end of the period. Moreover, regarding rail, the trend experienced from 1978 a negative trend with some fluctuations, reaching two peak, the first one in 1984 and the other one in 1995 with both the amount of 30million tonnes, approximately. On the other hand, water transportation followed a positive trend, carrying about 40 million of goods in 1974 to 65 million in 2002.
The graph illustrates the amount of products
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by road, water, rail and pipeline within the
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uk
from 1974 to 2002.

Overall
, road was the most
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used
method of transportation in the
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uk
, whereas the one that carried the least tonnages was pipeline.
In addition
, the three ways, road, water and pipeline experienced increases of
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good
while rail, even if it had
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some
slight variation at the
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end
of the period reached the same amount of year 1974.

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First of all
, The
first
result worth pointing out is the rise of about 30
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million
tonnes over the period. This type of transportation had a significant upward
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trend
from 1995 to 1998, and then it continued with a gradual increase.
On the other hand
, pipeline, beginning with less than 10
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million
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goods
,
gradually
grew, until it reached
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22million
tonnes, as from that quantities remained stable to the
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end
of the period.

Moreover
, regarding rail, the
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trend
experienced from 1978 a
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negative
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trend
with
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some
fluctuations, reaching two peak, the
first
one in 1984 and the other one in 1995 with both the amount of
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30million
tonnes, approximately.
On the other hand
, water transportation followed a
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positive
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trend
, carrying about 40
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million
of
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goods
in 1974 to 65
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million
in 2002.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

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