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Academic Writing Sample Task 1C WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Academic Writing Sample Task 1C WRITING TASK 1 The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. 9Ox3
The diagram provides chronological steps that shows how bricks are produced to the industry of buildings. Overall, to manufacture bricks you need clay with is extracted then molded into brick then kept to dry in the oven, after the bricks dries of its then cooled and packed and finally delivered. To make bricks, clay is extremely needed as it is its main resource. The clay has to be extracted using a digger. After extracting the clay its then filtered using a metal grid as it may contain some rocks. It is known that sand and water are added to the clay then molded into bricks. Bricks are then to left dry using a drying oven from 24 to 48 hours. After drying the bricks are then left in a kiln which will have a starting temperature of 200c and start increasing till it reaches a high temperature of 1300c. Bricks are then inserted in a cooling chamber and left their from 2 to 3 days. Finally, the bricks can be packaged and delivered using trucks to the building industries.
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bricks
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to the industry of buildings.
Overall
, to manufacture
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bricks
you need
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clay
with
is extracted
then molded into
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brick
then
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kept to dry
in the oven, after the
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bricks
dries of its then cooled and packed and
finally
delivered. To
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make
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bricks
,
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clay
is
extremely
needed as it is its main resource. The
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clay
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has to
be extracted
using a digger. After extracting the
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clay
its then filtered using a metal grid as it may contain
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some
rocks. It
is known
that sand and water are
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added
to the
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clay
then molded into
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bricks
.
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Bricks
are then to
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left
dry using a drying oven from 24 to 48 hours. After drying the
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bricks
are then
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left
in a kiln which will have a starting temperature of 200c and
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start
increasing till it reaches a high temperature of 1300c.
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Bricks
are then inserted in a cooling chamber and
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left
their from 2 to 3 days.
Finally
, the
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bricks
can
be packaged
and delivered using trucks to the building industries.

IELTS academic Academic Writing Sample Task 1C WRITING TASK 1 The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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