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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. WyqNe
The line graph gives information about the medium temperature of three cities (London, New York, Sydnay) per month while the table below illustrates the median hours of sunshine in the same towns per year. As far as the degree of temperature is concerned, New York is the most variable about climate. It starts the year with less than 5 degrees. Until July, the city climate gets hotter with slight raise. When it is 30° C degrees in that month, the heat of town begins to decline slowly till it reachs 5 degrees in December. Other major town, Sydnay is always hotter than other places. In winter, Synday town gets the hottest degree of temperature at 25° C. Despite the fact about sunshine hours of Sydnay which is longer ( 2, 473 per year) than New York day length ( 2, 535 in a year ), when New York shows its the hottest degree, Sydnay goes down quietly until 15 and rises again to 25 degrees with the similar rate until it gets its constency in November. As for the estate which the less length of day time ( 1, 180 per year ), London is fewer watm than 10 in January. However, the measure of London city's temperature goes up leisurely to 23 degrees of heat in the midsummer. When it comes to August, London starts to be colder and colder prior to the end of year with 9° C degrees.
The line graph gives information about the medium
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temperature
of three cities (London,
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New
York,
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Sydnay
) per month while the table below illustrates the median hours of sunshine in the same
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towns
per
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year
. As far as the
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degree
of
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temperature
is concerned
,
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New
York is the most variable about climate. It
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starts
the
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year
with less than 5
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degrees
. Until July, the city climate
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gets
hotter with slight raise. When it is 30° C
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degrees
in that month, the heat of
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town
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begins
to decline
slowly
till it
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reachs
5
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degrees
in December. Other major
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town
,
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Sydnay
is always hotter than other places. In winter,
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Synday
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town
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gets
the hottest
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degree
of
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temperature
at 25° C.

Despite the fact about sunshine hours of
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Sydnay
which is longer
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(
2, 473 per
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year)
than
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New
York day length
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(
2, 535 in a
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year
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)
, when
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New
York
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shows
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its
the hottest
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degree
,
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Sydnay
goes down
quietly
until 15 and rises again to 25
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degrees
with the similar rate until it
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gets
its
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constency
in November. As for the estate which the less length of day time
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(
1, 180 per
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year
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)
, London is fewer
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watm
than 10 in January.
However
, the measure of London city's
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temperature
goes up
leisurely
to 23
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degrees
of heat in the midsummer. When it
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comes
to August, London
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starts
to be colder and colder prior to the
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end
of
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year
with 9° C
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degrees
.

IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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