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The Chart below depicts the amount of a country's export in various departments During the year 2015 and 2016. The table Illustrates the preposition of change tope ob expoots in 2016 wmpared to 2015. a ste Steady Overall, the country's entire export earning was showing increase, where as only the Grens and jewellery was the only Catagood that was declined declined during the year. The petroleum Products leads the list with a massive export earning or just above 60 and around 64 billion on 2015 and 2016 respectively. Followed by the engineering goods which peaked on to around 62 Billion with a steady change of 8. 2%. Despite, gems and jewellery was a good revenue generating business, slumped from nearly 44 to 42 billions varied with a reduced 5. 16%. The agricultural products were showing a constant Performance throughout both the years Slightly above 31 and 32 billions respectively with a 0. 81% increase. However, thetextiles industry which was generating less revenue compared to otjer industry, which rose above its previous years revenue (around 25 and 31 billions respectively ). With an outstanding change in percentage in the entire industry with 15. 24 %
The Chart below depicts the amount of a country's export in various departments

During the year 2015 and 2016. The table Illustrates the

preposition of
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tope
ob
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expoots
in

2016
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wmpared
to 2015.

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a
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Steady

Overall
, the

country's entire export earning

was showing

increase,
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where as


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only


the
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Grens
and
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jewellery
was the
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only


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Catagood


that was
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declined declined
during the year.

The petroleum Products leads the list with a

massive export earning or
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just
above 60 and

around
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64 billion
on 2015 and 2016
respectively
.

Followed by the engineering
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goods
which peaked on

to around 62
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Billion
with a steady
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of 8. 2%.

Despite, gems and
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jewellery
was a
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good
revenue

generating business, slumped from
nearly
44 to 42 billions

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varied
with a
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reduced
5. 16%.

The agricultural products were showing a constant

Performance throughout both the years
Slightly
above

31 and 32
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billions
respectively
with a

0. 81% increase.
However
,
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thetextiles
industry which was generating less revenue compared to
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otjer
industry, which rose above its previous years revenue (around 25 and 31
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billions
respectively
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. With an outstanding
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in percentage in the entire industry with 15. 24 %
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