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The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant. ppwL
The graph shows the average percentage of people in the UK aged over 4 who watched TV or listened to the radio from October to December 1992. Overall, listening to the radio was more popular in the morning, while watching TV was more common at night. From 1am to 5am, the percentage of radio listeners was very low, at around 2-3 percent. However, there was then a sharp rise in listeners to a peak of 25 percent around 8am. After that, the number of listeners declined steadily to just over 10 percent by 3pm. There was a small increase of a few percent to around 5pm and then the percentage dropped until the end of the day with some small fluctuations. Around 3 percent of the population were watching TV at 2am and this figure rose slowly to about 7 percent by 8am. There was a fall back to around 3 percent by 11am, but then viewer numbers increased significantly to 15 percent by 1pm. The percentage of viewers was higher than radio listeners for the rest of the day, with TV watchers climbing to 40 percent of the population at 6pm and reaching a peak of just under 45 percent at 9pm. (190 words)
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in the UK aged over 4 who
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TV or listened to the
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from October to December 1992.

Overall
, listening to the
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was more popular in the morning, while watching TV was more common at night.

From 1am to 5am, the
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of
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listeners was
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low, at
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2-3
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.
However
, there was then a sharp rise in listeners to a peak of 25
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8am. After that, the number of listeners declined
steadily
to
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over 10
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by 3pm. There was a
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small
increase of a few
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to
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5pm and then the
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dropped until the
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of the day with
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fluctuations.

Around 3
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of the population were watching TV at 2am and this figure rose
slowly
to about 7
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by 8am. There was a fall back to
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3
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by 11am,
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then viewer numbers increased
significantly
to 15
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percent
by 1pm. The
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of viewers was higher than
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radio
listeners for the rest of the day, with TV watchers climbing to 40
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percent
of the population at 6pm and reaching a peak of
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under 45
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at 9pm. (190 words)

IELTS academic The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant.

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