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The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant. YNWd
The provided line graph gives information about the percentage of the population watched TV or listened to the radio during the day-time or night-time. This study has been realised among the UK population from October to December 1992. If we first glance at the graph, we can observe that 7% of the UK population started listening to radio from 6: 00 am in the morning whereas nobody watched TV at this time of day. The radio audiences gradually increased to reach a peak of 26% of people at 8. 30 am. Then, this trend went step by step down to about 4% of the audiences at 6 pm. We can truly affirm that people listened to radio mostly before heading to work or on the way to their workplace. However, regarding TV audiences the time period where people were watching it the most is obviously between 6. 00 pm to 10. 00 pm with the highest point reaching 45% at 8. 00 pm. To sum up, the UK population were more active listening to the radio in the early morning before going to work while they were active on watching TV in the afternoon once they got back from work to before they went to sleep.
The provided line graph gives information about the percentage of the
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watched
TV or listened to the
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radio
during the day-time or night-time. This study has been
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realised
among the UK
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population
from October to December 1992.

If we
first
glance at the graph, we can observe that 7% of the UK
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population
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started
listening to
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radio
from 6: 00
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am in the morning
whereas nobody
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watched
TV at this time of day. The
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radio
audiences
gradually
increased to reach a peak of 26% of
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people
at 8. 30 am. Then, this trend went step by step down to about 4% of the audiences at 6 pm. We can
truly
affirm that
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people
listened to
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radio
mostly
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before
heading to work or on the way to their workplace.
However
, regarding TV audiences the time period where
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people
were watching it the most is
obviously
between 6. 00 pm to 10. 00 pm with the highest point reaching 45% at 8.
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00
pm.

To sum up, the UK
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population
were more active listening to the
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radio
in the early morning
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before
going to work while they were active on watching TV in the afternoon once they
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got
back from work to
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before
they went to sleep.

IELTS academic The graph above shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the key details and making comparisons where relevant.

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