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The given table details export values of numerous products in two years 1997 and 2010 and units are mensured in HK dollars.

The given table details export values of numerous products in two years 1997 and 2010 and units are mensured in HK dollars. pewx0

The table gives the information about the values of majority products in two years 1997 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that equipment accounted for the highest number of values whereas metals followed the opposite trend. It is also noteworthy that clothing and manufacturing experienced a doward trend while telecommunity followed an upward trend. As can be seen from the table, equipment accounted for the highest amount of export production with 10, 3 billions in 1997, which was nearly 2 times higher than that of metals, in the following years, this category experienced an increase of 1, 3 billions. Similallity, from 1997 to 2010, the amount of metals experienced an upward trend, increasing from 2. 3 to 5. 1 billions. On the other hand, manufacturing and clothing contributed only around 5, 7 billions in 1997, then both of these categories increased with the fomar 4 billions and the latter 5 billions in 2010. These categories also remain a negative percentage changes which are - 17% and - 27 % respectively while others followed the opposite. Finally, the amount of value exported from technology climbed from 7. 9 to 12. 7 at the same time.

The table gives the information about the values of majority products in two years 1997 and 2010.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that equipment accounted for the highest number of values whereas metals followed the opposite trend. It is also
 noteworthy that clothing and manufacturing experienced a Possible spelling mistake found.towardHowardcowardCowarddotarddo ward
doward
 trend while Possible spelling mistake found.telecommutingtelecommute
telecommunity
 followed an upward trend.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from the table, equipment accounted for the highest amount of export production with 10, 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billions
 in 1997, which was nearly
 2 times higher than that of metals, in the following years, this category experienced an increase of 1, 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billions
. Possible spelling mistake found.Similarity
Similallity
, from 1997 to 2010, the amount of metals experienced an upward trend, increasing from 2. 3 to 5. 1 billions.

On the other hand
, manufacturing and clothing contributed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 around 5, 7 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billions
 in 1997, then both of these categories increased with the Possible spelling mistake found.Omar
fomar
 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billions
 and the latter 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlotstons
billions
 in 2010. These categories also
 remain a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 percentage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which are Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 17% and Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 27 % respectively
 while others followed the opposite.

Finally
, the amount of value exported from technology climbed from 7. 9 to 12. 7 at the same time. 