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The glance at the graph provided the number of Bulgarian emigrants who were aged 15-60, plans for 2001 and 2006.

The glance at the graph provided the number of Bulgarian emigrants who were aged 15-60, plans for 2001 and 2006. As the diagram shows, it has five categories according to their reasons. It is clear from the graphs that most popular reason for relocate from Bulgarian was travel and stay abroad. In 2001, 70 per cent of Bulgarian citizens were move to another country, after half-decade these numbers increased by 3 per cent. After that, in 2001, around one of ten percent of Bulgarian citizens went to foreign countries for travel, after five years above numbers reached to 6 per cent. Five per cent of people went to foreign countries for live there short space of time. In 2006, nine per cent of people went to other countries for above reason. In 2001, 7 per cent of Bulgarian population moved to abroad because of work that they did short period and then return to home, in the following half-decade only four per cent of Bulgarian citizen did it. Finally, both years eight percent of Bulgarians went to abroad for living immortally. Overall, and the both years, the large number of citizens relocated to the abroad just for living there.

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