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The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

the graph show the number of fishers in millions for various regions between 1970 ， 1980 and 2000， and the word's top ten exports of fish in 2000. the millions of fishers increased sharply from9%in 1970to24%in2000. A sharp increase was found in the millions of fishers between 1. 4%in1970 and 2. 0%in2000. the millions of fishers experienced decrease from 0. 7%in1970 to 0. 4%in2000. the millions of fishers in Asia was the largest，which was the between 9%in 1970 and24%in2000，the millions of fishers in Africa take the second place，which was the from 1. 4%in 1970 to 2%in 2000. the millions of fishers in Europe was the smallest，which was the between 0. 5%in1980 and 0. 8%in2000. all in all， the millions of Asia， Africa and North America saw an increase，while the millions of fishers in Europe saw an decrease， the millions of fishers of South America stayed the same。

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saw
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