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The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

the graph show the number of fishers in millions for various regions between 1970 , 1980 and 2000, and the word's top ten exports of fish in 2000. the millions of fishers increased sharply from9%in 1970to24%in2000. A sharp increase was found in the millions of fishers between 1. 4%in1970 and 2. 0%in2000. the millions of fishers experienced decrease from 0. 7%in1970 to 0. 4%in2000. the millions of fishers in Asia was the largest,which was the between 9%in 1970 and24%in2000,the millions of fishers in Africa take the second place,which was the from 1. 4%in 1970 to 2%in 2000. the millions of fishers in Europe was the smallest,which was the between 0. 5%in1980 and 0. 8%in2000. all in all, the millions of Asia, Africa and North America saw an increase,while the millions of fishers in Europe saw an decrease, the millions of fishers of South America stayed the same。
the
graph
show
the number of
fishers
in
millions
for various regions between 1970 , 1980 and
2000,
and the word's top ten exports of fish in 2000.

the
millions
of
fishers
increased
sharply
from9%in 1970to24%in2000. A sharp increase
was found
in the
millions
of
fishers
between 1. 4%in1970 and 2. 0%in2000.
the
millions
of
fishers
experienced decrease from 0. 7%in1970 to 0. 4%in2000.

the
millions
of
fishers
in Asia was the
largest,which
was the between 9%in 1970
and24%in2000,the
millions
of
fishers
in Africa take the second
place,which
was the
from
1. 4%in 1970 to 2%in 2000.
the
millions
of
fishers
in Europe was the
smallest,which
was the between 0. 5%in1980 and 0. 8%in2000.

all
in
all,
the
millions
of
Asia,
Africa and North America
saw
an
increase,while
the
millions
of
fishers
in Europe
saw
an
decrease,
the
millions
of
fishers
of South America stayed the
same。
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IELTS academic The chart and table show the number of fishers in millions for different regions between 1970, 1980 and 2000, and the world’s top ten exporters of fish in 2000.

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