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The given table shows the figures of six countries that produced a wastage in their urban areas in the year of 1980, 1990 and 2000.

The given table shows the figures of six countries that produced a wastage in their urban areas in the year of 1980, 1990 and 2000. GJqym

Japan was a least in waste production in 1980 but in 2000 urban area slightly increases around 2. 4 tonnes of wastage. Korea, was a 3rd highest country in 1990 to producing 31 tonnes off garbage, but in the year of 2000, almost 10% of tonnes reduced in wastage. In Ireland, there was a rapid increase in the unwanted waste generated from 20 to 41 million tonnes from 1980 to 1990 and in 2000, Ireland became second country to produces 52 thousands of tonnes in a year. In the span of 10 years, Portugal and Poland is the only country who increased steadily only by 1 millions of tonnes in the wastage and after 10 years again they reduced their garbage. Within the 10 year, USA were in his highest peak and rapidly Rose in 1980, 1990 and 2000 which is 141, 213, and 256 tonnes of polluted material produced incurred.

Japan was a least in waste production in 1980 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2000 urban area slightly
 increases around 2. 4 tonnes of wastage.

Korea, was a 3rd highest country in 1990 to producing 31 tonnes off garbage, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 of 2000, almost 10% of tonnes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in wastage.

In Ireland, there was a rapid increase in the unwanted waste generated from 20 to 41 million tonnes from 1980 to 1990 and in 2000, Ireland became second country to produces Use a singular form of the numeral here: "52 thousand".52 thousand
52 thousands of
 tonnes in a year.

In the span of 10 years, Portugal and Poland is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 country who increased steadily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 by Use a singular form of the numeral here: "1 million".1 million
1 millions of
 tonnes in the wastage and after 10 years again they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 their garbage. Within the 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, USA were in his highest peak and rapidly
 Rose in 1980, 1990 and 2000 which is 141, 213, and 256 tonnes of polluted material produced incurred. 