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have ownership car or use public transport

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Recently, in many countries around the world it has become an extremely controversial issue that growing the number of car ownership which led to a traffic jam. this must be stopped and proper solution should be applied. In this essay, I shall confine the discussion to some problems and some possible solutions. Obviously, a great deal of way causes this problem would be for people to having a high income so they can buy a lot of physical need. Another way is that lowing a taxation because the government Taxes are low. A good example is according to my own experience in my countries the office adds a VAT for all products in the rate of 5%. the case where the uncomfortable places when they set the feel un convenient and un safely because the crowded so this causes is considered one of the major causes of the problem. Solving these problems is not easy. However, the key to reducing these problems seems to lie increasing the prices of oil so that make everyone don’t want to use a car. . Equally important, providing a electronic transport which is more environmentally friendly. Perhaps Reducing the price of public transport In addition to providing a comfortable and convenient place for everyone can be offered to people to deal with the problem successfully. In conclusion, however, it is not doubtful that car ownership more popular than public transport which has a great deal of problems. These possible solutions, of course, are clear. So, the answer, I feel, lies somewhere in the middle. To put it in a different way, provided that the government addresses the roots of this problem, perhaps the solutions will come.

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