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Comparison of Three maps in different time period of two towns Meadow side town and Forton town

Comparison of Three maps in different time period of two towns Meadow side town and Forton town KyEwL
The three maps represents how the Meadowside town and the neighboring town Forton were developed since 1962 up to present year. Overall it is clear that there is a significant amount of development in both the towns in terms of land, transport and connectivity. The development and the expansion of the Meadowside town is vast compared to the Forton town since the beginning (That is from 1962). The road's width are prominently increased, which established a connectivity with the Forton town via road. other establishments such as suburbs, leisure complex, hotels, superstores, parks and stations were developed and came into existence gradually as the tears passed, and are also available till present. Forton town on the other hand developed it's rail routes and as the land expanded, Forton found a way to connect with the adjacent town Meadowside. both the towns got connected with each other by a single piece of land after 1985. As of now, considering the present year, both the town shares a common railway station and a huge business park. Thus in 1962, two separate towns are presently share a single land. Considering this drastic development, now the Meadowside town's name has been modified as Meadowside Suburb, which was possible by the enormous development in both the town since past years.
The three maps represents how the
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Meadowside
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town
and the neighboring
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Forton
were developed
since 1962 up to present year.
Overall
it is
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clear
that there is a significant amount of
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development
in both the
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towns
in terms of
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land
, transport and connectivity.

The
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development
and the expansion of the
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Meadowside
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town
is vast compared to the
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Forton
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town
since the beginning (
That is
from 1962). The road's width are
prominently
increased, which established a connectivity with the
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Forton
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town
via road.
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other
establishments such as suburbs, leisure complex, hotels, superstores, parks and stations
were developed
and came into existence
gradually
as the tears passed, and are
also
available till present.

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Forton
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town
on the other hand
developed
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it's
rail routes and as the
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land
expanded,
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Forton
found a way to connect with the adjacent
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town
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Meadowside
.
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both
the
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towns
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got
connected with each other by a single piece of
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land
after 1985. As of
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now
, considering the present year, both the
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town
shares a common railway station and a huge business park.
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Thus
in 1962, two separate
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towns
are
presently
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share
a single
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land
. Considering this drastic
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development
,
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now
the
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Meadowside
town's name has
been modified
as
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Meadowside
Suburb, which was possible by the enormous
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development
in both the
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town
since past years.
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IELTS academic Comparison of Three maps in different time period of two towns Meadow side town and Forton town

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