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The diagram below show how electricity is generated using wave power.

The diagram below show how electricity is generated using wave power. NMpqq
The diagrams show the structure and processes of generating electricity from the wave power. Overall, it can be seen that the complete structure is located near the sea, near to a cliff or sea wall and electricity can be generated using flowing water in and also when it is moving out. By analysis of the pictorial diagram, the electricity producing machine works in two ways. Firstly, the structure is placed near a sea so that the wave water gets inside the chamber and creates an air pressure that would rotate the turbine placed inside a column. The rotation of the turbine produces electricity which is stored in the cells and this electricity can be passed and used. On the other hand, the second picture depicts how electricity can be produced using the back flow of the sea. To continue it, the water gets off from the chamber and the air pressure is created again from the opposite direction and this rotates the turbine. Hence, the rotation of the turbine produces electricity and supplies it to the storage.
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show
the structure and processes of generating
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electricity
from the wave power.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the complete structure
is located
near the
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sea
, near to a cliff or
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sea
wall and
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electricity
can
be generated
using flowing water in and
also
when it is moving out.

By analysis of the pictorial diagram, the
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electricity
producing machine works in two ways.
Firstly
, the structure
is placed
near a
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sea
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so
that the wave water
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gets
inside the chamber and creates an air pressure that would rotate the
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turbine
placed inside a column. The rotation of the
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turbine
produces
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electricity
which
is stored
in the cells and this
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electricity
can
be passed
and
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used
.

On the other hand
, the second picture depicts how
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electricity
can
be produced
using the back flow of the
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sea
. To continue it, the water
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gets
off from the chamber and the air pressure
is created
again from the opposite direction and this rotates the
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turbine
.
Hence
, the rotation of the
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turbine
produces
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electricity
and supplies it to the storage.
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IELTS academic The diagram below show how electricity is generated using wave power.

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