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The given table chart about admission of pupils in district years at Manchestar university.

The given table chart about admission of pupils in district years at Manchestar university. WOqq

The table illustrates the data about the admission of new students in different years at Manchester University. Overall, there has been regular enrollment of students throughout the years and the proportion of female students had increased continously. Whilst, there was decline in the percentage of male learners. In detail, there were 327 fresh students got admissions and this figure rose to 6254 until 2017. During 1937, 45% females were enrolled for tertiary education but 10 % decline was found in this category. in 1967, while this figure again reached at 55 % in 2017. In contrast, the percentage criteria of male students was facing regular changes. The percentage of male students was 55% in 1937 which was increased by 10% in 1967. In 2017, this figure declined by 20%. Proceeding further, 55% students came from within 40 miles of Manchestar and this figure decreased heavily to around 2% by 2017. By contrast, the counting of international students was continously decreased. There was 6% students who came from aboard in 1937 and 7% in 1967 respectively. Surprisingly, the proportion of oversea students accounted for 32 percent in the year 2017 from 102 countries.

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