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The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. wROd
This table provides information about the percentage of employment for both genders in Canada, South Korea and Sweden, in 2005 and 2015 year. Overall, all of the percentage has been increased by time, with an exception in Sweden for males, where the showings decreased gently by the end. Also, Sweden showings for females, that was on the first place of employment, dropped significantly. Looking at the details, showings in Canada that were at the third place of employment for males, with about 62 percent in 2005, but by the end of 2015 employment rate increased considerably to about 70 percent below, and got to the same level as Sweden in 2015. Furthermore, male showings that were above 39 percent in 2005, felt an upward trend by the end having about 55 percent below. Also, male employment rate in South Korea, got to a first place of percentage among all counties having about 79 percent, when in 2005 the percentage was about 73%. Noteworthy, that female rate got an upward trend by time, having about 30 percent in 2005 and ending by about 34 percent in 2015. However, male showing in Sweden dropped from the first place among all, to the same level as Canada in 2015 having 70 percent at the end. Despite the fact that the female rate in Sweden was only 45 percent at the beginning, it felt a fractional rise to about 50 percent below by 2015.
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IELTS academic The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

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