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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. q3ap
The picture here depicts the process of electricity generation from a wave-energy machine using the energy from water waves. First of all, There are two types of wave-energy machines. First one is fixed deep in to the water source that produces high output from larger waves. Also, It has high installation charges. Next one is almost on the shore, producing low output from the small waves. The charges for installation is also low. For every wave-energy machine, there are 2 chambers consisting of turbines that run constantly with the energy from water. The air flowing through both the chambers rotate the turbines so that it can generate energy. This is one of the sustainable forms of energy. The turbines rotate with the airflow and energy is passed to electricity generator to convert it to electric energy.
The picture here depicts the process of electricity generation from a wave-energy machine using the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
from water waves.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, There are two types of wave-energy machines.
First
one is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fixed
deep in to the water source that produces high output from larger waves.
Also
, It has high installation charges.
Next
one is almost on the shore, producing low output from the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
waves. The charges for installation is
also
low.

For every wave-energy machine, there are 2 chambers consisting of turbines that run
constantly
with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
from water. The air flowing through both the chambers rotate the turbines
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it can generate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
. This is one of the sustainable forms of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
. The turbines rotate with the airflow and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
is passed
to electricity generator to convert it to electric
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
136 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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