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The given pie charts illustrate the population of different age groups in 2 different countries(Yemen and Italy) during 2000 and 2050.

The given pie charts illustrate the population of different age groups in 2 different countries(Yemen and Italy) during 2000 and 2050. 5bBEn
The given pie charts illustrate the population of different age groups in 2 different countries(Yemen and Italy) during 2000 and 2050. Overall it can be seen that both nations had a significant amount of people between the age of 15-59, and expected to be the majority during 2050. Although the young population accounted for more than half in Yemen, it is predicted to decrease by 2050. In contrast, the senior citizens' population is to be increased. In Yemen, in 2000, the population of mid-age was 46. 5%, and is projected to be 57. 3% by 2050. Similarly, the old age population is expected to rise by a mere 1. 4% by 2050. On the other hand, the tinder population was comprised of 50. 1%, however, a reduction by approximately 13% is projected to be in 2050. In Italy, the age group of 15 to 59 years shared 61. 6% during 2000, but it might be decremented to 46. 2%. Likewise, a slight reduction of 2. 7% is expected in a population of children by 2050, which shared 14. 3% of the total population. In opposition, during 2050, the old-age population is expected to rise up by 18% in the year 2050, hence it was just 24% in 2000.
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accounted for more than half in Yemen, it
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of mid-age was 46. 5%, and
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In Italy, the
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group of 15 to 59 years shared 61. 6% during 2000,
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IELTS academic The given pie charts illustrate the population of different age groups in 2 different countries(Yemen and Italy) during 2000 and 2050.

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