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The given pie chart depicts five different fuel sources for producinga electricity in France and Australia in the year 1980 and 2000. overall he measures are illustrated in Units. Overall, nuclear power was used 15 % in 1980 which became the major source of electricity in 2000 in France. Whereas, in Australia half of the units of electricity production was from Coal that later became three fourth in 2000. To begin with oil, natural gas and coal constituted the significant source of energy in 1980 in France, which altogether 70 units of the total production. Half of the electricity produced in 1980 in Australia was from coal. Hydropower and natural gases were also depended. oil was the least preferred source in Australia in 1980. in 2000 nuclear energy was marked an increase of 126 units in France compared to the year 1980. the natural gas sharply declined from 25 units to 2. On the other hand, coal remained the main source of energy in Australia in both years. The hydropower also shown a 16 unit increase in the same year
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in France and Australia in the
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1980 and 2000.
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in 2000 in France.
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production was from Coal that later became three fourth in 2000.

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with oil, natural gas and coal constituted the significant
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of energy in 1980 in France, which altogether 70
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produced in 1980 in Australia was from coal.

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oil
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in Australia in 1980.
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2000 nuclear energy
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in France compared to the
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1980.
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of energy in Australia in both years. The hydropower
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shown a 16
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