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The bar chart illustrates the changes in the average prices of houses in five various cities in a 12-year period starting from 1990. As well as referring to the prices in 1989. All in all, the period has been divided into 2 sections. The majority of cities in the first particular part have less change in the average prices referring to that in 1989. Meanwhile, most of those megalopolises having quite obvious change compared to the prices in 1989. Regarding the first half-decade, Britons, especially London residences, along with Tokyo inhabitants enjoyed around -7% change from 1989 prices of houses. After it, in second place, comes New York (USA) which managed to get a -5% change. Both Frankfurt in Germany and Madrid in Spain experienced a similar proportion of change varies from 2 to 2. 5%. From 1996 and on till 2002, Tokyo maintained its position with slight growth in the change to become -5% instead of -7%. Otherwise, London, as well as New York, experienced an entire switch, which is most evident in changes to be 12%, and 5%, respectively. The gap between Madrid and Frankfurt climbed to the extend of 2%.
The bar chart illustrates the
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in five various cities in a 12-year period starting from 1990.
As well
as referring to the
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prices
in 1989.

All in all, the period has
been divided
into 2 sections. The majority of cities in the
first
particular part have less
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change
in the average
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prices
referring to that in 1989. Meanwhile, most of those megalopolises having quite obvious
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change
compared to the
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prices
in 1989.

Regarding the
first
half-decade, Britons,
especially
London residences, along with Tokyo inhabitants enjoyed around -7%
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from 1989
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prices
of
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houses
. After it, in second place,
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comes
New York (USA) which managed to
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a -5%
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. Both Frankfurt in Germany and Madrid in Spain experienced a similar proportion of
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varies from 2 to 2. 5%.

From 1996 and on till 2002, Tokyo maintained its position with slight growth in the
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change
to become -5%
instead
of -7%.
Otherwise
, London,
as well
as New York, experienced an entire switch, which is most evident in
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to be 12%, and 5%,
respectively
. The gap between Madrid and Frankfurt climbed to the
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of 2%.
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