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Tabular graph for college bookshop

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The given tabular graph provides information about the usage of books namely fiction and nonfiction and magazine by book club members and non book club members in 1998. It can be seen that among the three types of books magazines sold out the most while the least one was fiction books. Nearly half of the total books where taken by college students. The table data clearly shows that college students who are the non book club members took 1474 books which includes 31 fiction 194 non-fiction and 1249 magazines. On the other hand, member of public had taken only 122 fiction and 882 magazines and they had not taken fiction book. Meanwhile the college staff bought a total of 405 book where most of them was magazines. The second biggest consumer is the book club members who took 1051 books. They purchased 942 non fiction books which was popular among them whereas they only bought 76 fiction and 33 magazines. The total number of magazines sold out was 1696 which is more than half of the total books purchased.
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and nonfiction and
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magazine
by
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club
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members
and non
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members
in 1998. It can be
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seen
that among the three types of
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books
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magazines
sold out the most while the least one was
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fiction
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books
.
Nearly
half of the
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books
where taken by college students. The table data
clearly
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shows
that college students who are the non
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book
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club
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members
took 1474
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books
which includes 31
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fiction
194 non-fiction and 1249
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magazines
.
On the other hand
,
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member
of public had taken
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122
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fiction
and 882
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magazines and
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the college staff
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a
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of 405
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where most of them was
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magazines
. The second biggest consumer is the
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club
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who took 1051
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. They
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purchased
942 non
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fiction
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books
which was popular among them whereas they
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76
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and 33
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magazines
. The
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total
number of
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magazines
sold out was 1696 which is more than half of the
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purchased
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