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The given pie charts give information about average family expenditure in Japan and malaysia

The given pie charts give information about average family expenditure in Japan and malaysia r6brL

The first given pie chart gives information about average family expenditure in Japan while the second pie chart shows the number in Malaysia in the year 2010. Looking at the pie chart, it can be seen clearly that Japanese households spent slightly equally money on housing, transportation, food, and other goods and services. Besides, families in Malaysia almost pay for housing, food, and other goods and services. Regarding the Japanese household expense, other goods and services accounted for the highest percentage of the total money spending at 29% while housing, transport, food required 21%, 20%, 24% respectively. Only 6% of the family budget was used for health care. Regarding household expenditure in Malaysia country, housing made up the highest proportion at 34%. Other goods and services and food required nearly the same amount of money at 26%, 27% respectively which are 2 times higher than the combination of transport and health care.

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 for health care.

Regarding household expenditure in Malaysia country, housing made up the highest proportion at 34%. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
Other
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goods
 and services and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 required nearly
 the same amount of money at 26%, 27% respectively
 which are 2 times higher than the combination of transport and health care. 