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The given pie charts depicts the various explanations for selecting Dorrifod University by 2 groups of students.

The given pie charts depicts the various explanations for selecting Dorrifod University by 2 groups of students. mWeML
The given pie charts depicts the various explanations for selecting Dorrifod University by 2 groups of students. Most of the students from both age groups have chosen the university because of the location of the campus from their homes. In the age group of 18-24, 35% of students have selected the university based on the course provided while only 24% of students with age of 25 and more have selected with the same reason. However, barely 4% of students under the age 24 have selected the university considering it's industry related ciricculum whereas 20% students of age 25 and above have selected the university for the same reason. Both groups have less percentage of students selecting university considering it an oppurtunity to study abroad as a part of the course. A very few students aged above 18 and below 24 have selected the university based on its reputation of the teaching staff while almost 12% of students of the age 25 and above have considered the same in selecting the university. Age group of 18-24 have considered facilities of the campus while only 2% of the other group have taken it as a criteria. 35% and 24% students of the age group 18-24 and age 25 and above respectively, have shortlisted the Dorriford University for the courses offered.
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of 18-24, 35% of
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considering it's industry related
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ciricculum
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of
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25 and
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considering it an
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based on its reputation of the teaching staff while almost 12% of
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25 and
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of 18-24 have considered facilities of the campus while
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. 35% and 24%
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18-24 and
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25 and
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respectively
, have shortlisted the
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Dorriford
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for the courses offered.

IELTS academic The given pie charts depicts the various explanations for selecting Dorrifod University by 2 groups of students.

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5.0
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