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The given pie charts depicts the information about the agriculture production in eastern and Western region

The given pie charts depicts the information about the agriculture production in eastern and Western region pKlPy

The information compare the production of farming in two various areas in a specific nation is depicted by rendered circular representions. Overall, it is vividly manifested that the both regions manufacture the meat in equal amount however eastern areas give less preference to vegetables and grain while western vegetables. Analysing data into more details, in eastern region, the production of meat was on top which was recorded at 35% however, dairy products were less than five - percent. Vegetables were ranked third with 20%. There was grain which was not more popular in this area which was calculated at just half less than milky products. Moving to the further details of western region, there was grain leading crop which was generated by this area which was registered at 45%. As followed by meat stood at second position with more than three quarter. Moreover, dairy products were less than half as compared to eastern side. Vegetables were immensely minimal manufactured in this field which merely 5%.

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