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The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.

The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens. 7Mmy
Overall, the most significant people who lived in the destitute condition were sole parents and single people without children, which together accounted for half of the total families living in poverty, while the aged couple and the single aged person, generated the least amount of poor families in the UK. Overall, the most significant people lived in the destitute condition were sole parents and single person without children, which together accounted for half of the total families living in poverty, while aged couple and single aged person, generated the least amount of poor families in the UK. The given pie chart represents the percentage of different family types under the poverty line in the UK in the year 2002.
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in the destitute condition were sole parents and
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without children, which together accounted for half of the total
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families
living in poverty, while the
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couple and the
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single
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person, generated the least amount of poor
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families
in the UK.

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, the most significant
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people
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in the destitute condition were sole parents and
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person without children, which together accounted for half of the total
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families
living in poverty, while
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aged
couple and
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single
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aged
person, generated the least amount of poor
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families
in the UK.

The
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pie chart represents the percentage of
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types under the poverty line in the UK in the year 2002.
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IELTS academic The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.

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