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The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%). od7V
The chart below gives us the most reported issues among the people living in UK cities in 2008. However, the graph gives us the information about the most reported issues like Health services, Air pollution, Education and training. The living issues of residents of cities of Newcastle, Belfast, Birmingham, Cardiff, Manchester, Glasgow and london. As we see that most of the residents of the UK had complained enormusly about the health services. The percentage of the residents who had raised an issue on the health services was about 60 %. The belfast city had the highest percentage of people complaining over the health service. Among all the cities not only residents of belfast had raised an issue but also the people of cardiff had raised an issue at proliferate percentage which is almost equal to that of belfast. Newcastle, birmingham, Manchester, Glasgow, London had around 50 % of residents who complained about the Health services. Moreover, Glasgow had the least percentage of people about less to 50% after comparision with all the cities as given in the report. The second passage talks about the people of UK who have raised an issue over the Education and training. The residents of glasgow and London had the equal percentage of people who have raised issue. Not only glasglow and london had equal percentage of issues reported but also Belfast and Birmingham had same percent of people who reported issues about the education and training. The highest and least percentage of residents who raised issue about the education and training were Glasgow and manchester whose percentages were approximately around 55% and 45 %. Lets us see about airpollution, In all the cities, issued raised about airpollution were about 15%. The highest percent of residents in Manchester have rasied a complaint on airpollution. The next leading were london with 15% nearly and cardiff with around 12 %. The percent of people whoo have raised an issue over Birmingham and Glasgow were equal which is less than 10 percent. The lowest were Newcastle and belfast. Finally, The number of issues raised against the airpollution were less comparitively to other issues like Health services, Education and Training. Hence i consider that the issues about the Health services were at a proliferate rate by the residents of UK. Moreover, The percentage of the people who complained about the Education and training were no less. They were less by 10 % approximately.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).

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