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map before and after renovation

map before and after renovation 3qol
the maps compare the structure of islip town centre before and after development. Let start with the road. The old main road will be divided to dual carriage ways to run both north and south side of town. In the north section above the main road, the countryside at north part of the town will change to 4 new areas which are bus station, shopping center, car park and new housing area. The main road are no longer allow car and change to pedestrians only walk way. In the south section, There will be no change in shops area. similarly, Housing area stays on the same area but will be divided to housing area and new housing area. Park also stay at same place but will be decrease in size. School which at the south west will be at the old place but slightly larger. In conclusion. There will be dual carriage way. The north part of the town will be received more renovation in to 4 new area. The south part change lesser.
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section above the main
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, the countryside at
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housing
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. The main
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are no longer
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car and
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to pedestrians
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in shops
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, Housing
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stays on the same
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IELTS academic map before and after renovation

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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