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The given pie chart illustrates the overall rating of 100 customers coming to the Parkway hotel by a survey in 2005 and 2010.

The given pie chart illustrates the overall rating of 100 customers coming to the Parkway hotel by a survey in 2005 and 2010. lqJP1
The given pie chart illustrates the overall rating of 100 customers coming to the Parkway hotel by a survey in 2005 and 2010. In general, it is clear that most of the visitors felt that hotel service was satisfactory in 2005 while in 2010, the result of good reviews had the highest proportion of all. Over the period from 2005 to 2010, satisfactory rating reaching a peak of 45% in 2005 decreased significantly, to 17% in 2000. Besides, the number of people who rated the service was poor fell nearly a half in 2010 than it was in 2005, about 9%. The similar trend was experienced by the very poor assessments, which dropped noticeably 11% in 2005. By contrast, over the same period, there were remarkable growths in the proportions of good and excellent feedback from visitors traveling to the Parkway hotel, 14% to 39% and 5% to 28%, respectively.
The
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pie chart illustrates the
overall
rating of 100 customers coming to the Parkway hotel by a survey in 2005 and 2010.

In general
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that most of the visitors felt that hotel service was satisfactory in 2005 while in 2010, the result of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
reviews had the highest proportion of all.

Over the period from 2005 to 2010, satisfactory rating reaching a peak of 45% in 2005 decreased
significantly
, to 17% in 2000.
Besides
, the number of
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people
who rated the service was poor fell
nearly
a half in 2010 than it was in 2005, about 9%. The similar trend
was experienced
by the
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very
poor assessments, which dropped
noticeably
11% in 2005.

By contrast, over the same period, there were remarkable growths in the proportions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and excellent feedback from visitors traveling to the Parkway hotel, 14% to 39% and 5% to 28%,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The given pie chart illustrates the overall rating of 100 customers coming to the Parkway hotel by a survey in 2005 and 2010.

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