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The line graph illustrates the count of Underground Station travellers between 6.00 to 22.00 in one

The line graph illustrates the count of Underground Station travellers between 6. 00 to 22. 00 in one DqnGE

The line graph illustrates the count of Underground Station travellers between 6. 00 to 22. 00 in one day. It can be clearly seen that counts vary and follow a particular pattern at rush hours of the day. One thing that clearly stands out is that the graph is rising sharply between 6. 00 to 7. 30, increasing the count of the passengers from 100 to 400 and again declining dramatically within 7. 30 to 10. 00, where the count reaches from 400 to 180. Moreover, the graph is following a similar trend, from 16. 00 to 19. 30. Where the pick rush hour can be found at 18. 00 with 390 Underground train users, where the least number of travellers can be found between 100 to 120. However, the counts are growing moderately from 10. 00 to 11. 00, reaching 200, and afterward going up significantly by 80 within another one hour. The line is growing slowly by another 20 members by approximately 13. 30, which is the third-highest rush hour of the day. Henceforth the graph is moving down rapidly, by making the count 100 by approximately another two hours. It can be concluded that 6. 00, 16. 00, 20. 00, and 22. 00 are the least crowded times in the station where 100 to 150 passengers can be found, On contrary to that 7. 30, 13. 30, 18. 00 are the highest rush hours of the day, where 300 to 400 strangers can be found at the station.

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However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpollcalculationtotalresulttoll
counts
 are growing moderately
 from 10. 00 to 11. 00, reaching 200, and afterward going up significantly
 by 80 within another one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
hour
. The line is growing slowly
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hour
 of the day. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Henceforth,
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 is moving down rapidly
, by making the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpollcalculationtotalresulttoll
count
 100 by approximately another two hours.

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 are the least crowded times in the station where 100 to 150 passengers can be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeginorganizeraiseformlaunchcreate
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, On contrary to that 7. 30, 13. 30, 18. 00 are the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreamflowblitzsurgedashflood
rush
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hours
 of the day, where 300 to 400 strangers can be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbeginorganizeraiseformlaunchcreate
found
 at the station. 