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The charts below show the wind generation around the world and the percentage of electricity generated by wind power by various countries

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The charts above show the wind generation around the world and the percentage of electricity generated by wind energy by different countries. Again. Again. The nations with the least percentage of electricity generated by the wind are the US with 6. 8%. In addition, the rest of Europe also has a relatively low share of electricity (7. 6%). However, in Spain, the rate compared to the US, Germany and Spain is the highest with 12. 2% and in Germany it is quite good with 9. 3%. Next, we can see that people's demand for electricity around the world has been increasing for 20 years. The year 2000 was the year with the lowest number of gigawatts of power produced (0 gigawatts). The number of gigawatts of energy produced in 2005 was higher than it was five years ago, but not significantly (about 100 gigawatts). It can be said that in 2011, the number of gigawatts of electricity produced is gradually increasing with 300 gigawatts of electricity. Finally, the number of gigawatts of electricity skyrocketed in 2020 (about over 1, 000 gigawatts) in line with the needs of people today. In short, as society is growing, the demand for electricity is increasing, so the power source is increasing
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the wind generation around the world and the percentage of
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generated by wind energy by
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different
countries.

Again. Again. The nations with the least percentage of
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electricity
generated by the wind are the US with 6. 8%.
In addition
, the rest of Europe
also
has a
relatively
low share of
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electricity
(7. 6%).
However
, in Spain, the rate compared to the US, Germany and Spain is the highest with 12. 2% and in Germany it is quite
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good
with 9. 3%.

Next
, we can
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that
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people
's demand for
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electricity
around the world has been
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increasing
for 20 years. The
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year
2000 was the
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year
with the lowest
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number
of gigawatts of power produced (0 gigawatts). The
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number
of gigawatts of energy produced in 2005 was higher than it was five years ago,
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but
not
significantly
(about 100 gigawatts). It can
be said
that in 2011, the
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number
of gigawatts of
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electricity
produced is
gradually
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increasing
with 300 gigawatts of
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electricity
.
Finally
, the
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number
of gigawatts of
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electricity
skyrocketed in 2020 (about over 1, 000 gigawatts) in line with the needs of
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people
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today
.

In short, as society is growing, the demand for
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electricity
is
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increasing
,
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so
the power source is
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increasing
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IELTS academic The charts below show the wind generation around the world and the percentage of electricity generated by wind power by various countries

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