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production of making sugar

production of making sugar 0aP1G

The diagram illustrates the production of sugar. The general overview is that this process consist of number of stages. starting from growing cane to finishing product. The process commence with growing cane, it will take 12-18 months for harvest. Harvesting process have taken by machine or human then moved to factory. In the following step, raw cane are squeezed in crashing process to produce fresh cane juice. At this stage, solid wast from raw cane will be exaggerated and only use the liquid. Meanwhile, can juice have been purified in limestone filter and evaporated by heat until it become sticky called syrup. Next step, centrifuge processing will be separate sugar crystal from syrup and store in warehouse. After that, sugar is already to use and send to customer.

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process
 consist of number of stages. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStarting
starting
 from growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwalking stickpolerod
cane
 to finishing product.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 commence with growing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwalking stickpolerod
cane
, it will take 12-18 months for harvest. Harvesting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 have taken by machine or human then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to factory. In the following step, raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwalking stickpolerod
cane
are squeezed
 in crashing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 to produce fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwalking stickpolerod
cane
 juice. At this stage, solid wast from raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwalking stickpolerod
cane
 will be exaggerated
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the liquid.

Meanwhile, can juice have been purified
 in limestone filter and evaporated by heat until it become sticky called syrup. Next
 step, centrifuge processing will be separate sugar crystal from syrup and store in warehouse. After that, sugar is already to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to customer. 