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The graph provides data on number of first language speakers in different countries. The first thing we can notice here is that Chinese has the highest number of speakers in the world.

The graph provides data on number of first language speakers in different countries. The first thing we can notice here is that Chinese has the highest number of speakers in the world. 0aPJ5
The graph provides data on number of first language speakers in different countries. The first thing we can notice here is that Chinese has the highest number of speakers in the world. The next most important language after Chinese is english with 470 speakers. A striking point is that there are twice as many Chinese speakers as Hindi. Followed by Spanish and Russian. The languages: Arabic and Benagli are used by less people around the world, French is the least used first-language and has a total of 124 milloin users. Portuguese and Japanese are in the bottom half of the chart a they are less used languages in the world. We can conclude that the most wide spread languages in the world are Chinese, English, Hindi. The way these have spread around the world highly depends on the way people have migrated and this throws light on the fact that the many people have migrated from China, England and India.
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