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The given picture illustrates the steps in the production of soft cheese.

The given picture illustrates the steps in the production of soft cheese. WNd0
The given picture illustrates the steps in the production of soft cheese. It can be clearly seen that five main steps are there in the making of soft cheese. Initially, water and milk are mixed in a mixer. After this step the mixture is cooled at 5°C for 2 hours. In the following step, the cooled mixture is sent for fermentation at 35°C for 2 hours. But, before fermentation, salt is added to the cooled mixture. Then, the fermented mixture is evaporated at 100°C for eight hours. Steam is allowed to escape through an outlet. Finally the mixture is sent for cooling. This is done at 5°C for eight hours. The mixture becomes very thick on cooling. At the bottom is a filter through which the water is filtered out and on the top is an outlet through which the cheese is filtered out. This is very soft in consistency. Overall, it can be seen that the process of making soft cheese is a very complicated process involving many steps. However, the final product is a very soft cheese, which is delicious to eat.
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picture illustrates the
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in the production of
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soft
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cheese
. It can be
clearly
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seen
that five main
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steps
are there in the making of
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soft
cheese.

Initially
, water and milk
are mixed
in a mixer. After this
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step
the
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mixture
is cooled
at
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5°C
for 2
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hours
. In the following
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step
, the cooled
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mixture
is
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sent
for fermentation at
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35°C
for 2
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hours
.
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,
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before
fermentation, salt is
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added
to the cooled
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mixture
. Then, the fermented
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mixture
is

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evaporated
at
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100°C
for eight
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hours
. Steam is
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allowed
to escape through an outlet.
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Finally
the
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mixture
is
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sent
for cooling. This
is done
at
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5°C
for eight
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hours
. The
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mixture
becomes
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very


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thick
on cooling. At the bottom is a filter through which the water
is filtered
out and on the top is an outlet through which the
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cheese
is filtered
out. This is
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very
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soft
in consistency.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the process of making
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soft
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cheese
is a
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very
complicated process involving
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many
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steps
.
However
, the final product is a
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very
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soft
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cheese
, which is delicious to eat.
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IELTS academic The given picture illustrates the steps in the production of soft cheese.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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