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The charts show the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals between 1990 to 2020, while the graph displays the numbers of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family in the same years.

The charts show the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals between 1990 to 2020, while the graph displays the numbers of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family in the same years. bL53
The charts show the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals between 1990 to 2020, while the graph displays the numbers of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family in the same years. The percentage of food budget of average family sent on restaurant meals increased significantly every year. It started at 10 percent of food budget spent on restaurant meals in 1990 and rose to 35 percent in 2010. In 2020, 50 percent of the average family’s food budget was spent on restaurant meals. The trend of fast-food restaurant meals rose steadily from 20 meals per year in 1990 to 30 meals per year in 2000. Then, it surged sharply from 30 meals in 2000 to 85 meals per year in 2020. Meanwhile, the trend of sit-down restaurants meals grew gradually. Overall, there were significant upward trends of percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals and the number of fast-food meals every year.
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per family in the same years.

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of average family
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in 1990 and rose to 35 percent in 2010. In 2020, 50 percent of the average family’s
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The trend of
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rose
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in 1990 to 30
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in 2000. Then, it surged
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in 2020. Meanwhile, the trend of sit-down
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grew
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IELTS academic The charts show the percentage of food budget spent on restaurant meals between 1990 to 2020, while the graph displays the numbers of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family in the same years.

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