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The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development. gLea
The given layouts depict the current and proposed plans of an office building. It is manifest from the graph that radical changes have been planned for the future office building. Presently, there are two grass areas located on the west and east of the building, with a washroom and a reception towards the lower left part of the eastern grassland. Four offices are there on the south between the western grass area and the reception. Opposite these offices towards the north, a kitchen, a canteen and a stock room can be seen. Enormous changes have been planned for the future office building. The western grassland will be converted into an outdoor activity area, whereas the eastern one will be modified into a coffee counter at the north and a meeting area in the south. The reception and the entrance are also intended to be relocated to the mid of the two office rooms on the south. The kitchen and the canteen on the north are planned to be replaced by two office rooms. The stock room will retain its place. Overall, it is clear that the office building is planned to be totally renovated in the future.
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current
and proposed plans of an
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office
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building
. It is manifest from the graph that radical
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changes
have been
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planned
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office
building.

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, there are two grass
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areas
located on the west and east of the
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building
, with a washroom and a reception towards the lower
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left
part of the eastern grassland. Four
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offices
are there on the south between the western grass
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area
and the reception. Opposite these
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offices
towards the north, a kitchen, a canteen and a stock
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room
can be
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seen
. Enormous
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changes
have been
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planned
for the future
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office
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building
. The western grassland will
be converted
into an outdoor activity
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area
, whereas the eastern one will
be modified
into a coffee counter at the north and a meeting
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area
in the south. The reception and the entrance are
also
intended to
be relocated
to the mid of the two
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office
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rooms
on the south.
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The
kitchen and the canteen on the north are
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planned
to
be replaced
by two
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office
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rooms
.
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The
stock
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room
will retain its place.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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office
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building
is
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planned
to be
totally
renovated in the future.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show how an office building looks at present and the plan for its future development.

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197 words
6.0
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