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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. BBej
The diagram compares the temperature and daylight hours of London, UK and Sydney, Australia in the year of 2018. Overall, Temperature of Sydney was the highest with 31 degree celsius on 30th December. while climate of London was the least with 10 degree celsius on the same date. Firstly, the time of sunrsie was at 08: 05 in London on Friday 28th. There was only one mintue difference in sunrise for next two days in that city. Whereas it was different in Sydney, the time of sunrise was at 5: 45 and there was no such difference for consuctive days. Secondly, Sunset timings were also not same in both the cities. In UK, it was at 15: 57. In contrast Australia sunset time was at 20: 06. Lastly, there was lot differences in climate conditions in both the cities. In London, Maximum temerature was 13 degree celsius and minimum was at 3 degree celsius on Sunday 29th December. The temperature of Sydney was the highest on Sunday 30th December, topmost was at 31 degree celsius and lowest was at 17 degree celsius.
The diagram compares the temperature and daylight hours of London, UK and Sydney, Australia in the year of 2018.

Overall
, Temperature of Sydney was the highest with 31
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celsius
on 30th December.
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while
climate of London was the least with 10
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celsius
on the same date.

Firstly
, the time of
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sunrsie
was at 08: 05 in London on Friday 28th. There was
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one
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mintue
difference in sunrise for
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two days in that city. Whereas it was
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in Sydney, the time of sunrise was at 5: 45 and there was no such difference for
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consuctive
days.

Secondly
, Sunset timings were
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not same in both the cities. In UK, it was at 15: 57. In
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contrast
Australia sunset time was at 20: 06.

Lastly
, there was lot differences in climate conditions in both the cities. In London, Maximum
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temerature
was 13
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celsius
and minimum was at 3
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celsius
on Sunday 29th December. The temperature of Sydney was the highest on Sunday 30th December, topmost was at 31
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celsius
and lowest was at 17
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.

IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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