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The given picture illustrates the process by which instant noodles are produced.

The given picture illustrates the process by which instant noodles are produced. RjQG

The given picture illustrates the process by which instant noodles are produced. Overall, it is clear that there are 8 stages in this linear process, commencing with storing flour in silos and ending with labeling and sealing cups. At the first stage of this process, flour is pumped from a truck into tower silos for storage before being put into a mixing machine, where it is mixed with a combination of water and oil. After this stage has been completed, the resulting mixture is rolled over to create dough sheets, and then going through a machine to be separated into strips. During the next stage, these dough strips are molded into noodles discs, after which they are cooked with oil and left to dry. Following this, these dried noodles discs, together with vegetables and spices, are put into cups, and the process finally ends with these cups being labeled and sealed.

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, commencing with storing flour in silos and ending with labeling and sealing cups.

At the first
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, flour is pumped
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before
being put
 into a mixing machine, where it is mixed
 with a combination of water and oil. After this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 has been completed
, the resulting mixture is rolled
 over to create dough sheets, and then going through a machine to be separated
 into strips.

During the next
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stage
, these dough strips are molded
 into noodles discs, after which they are cooked
 with oil and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 to dry. Following this, these dried noodles discs, together with vegetables and spices, are put
 into cups, and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
finally
 ends with these cups being labeled
 and sealed. 