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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave “very good” rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave “very good” rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses. Kbm9
The given table represents the rating towards the facilities of three courses, namely – economics, law and commerce. It is interesting to note that commerce earned the highest satisfaction in all resources. In terms of pre-course satisfaction, commerce tops in these three subjects, with 95% showing satisfaction. 72% of the students rated the pre-course information of law as ‘very good’ and the figure for economics was the least, with slightly lass than 60% being satisfied with it. When it comes to teaching, tutor and print resources, approximately equal percentage (95%, 92% and 83% respectively) of economics and commerce students rated these facilities as very good. However, only about 70% law students were satisfied with these services. Turning to other resources, about 80% each of commerce and law students were satisfied, whereas only 60% of economics students were satisfied with other resources. Overall, the resources provided by commerce, law and economics showed varied popularity among the students.
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table represents the rating towards the facilities of three courses,
namely
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economics,
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law
and
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commerce
. It is interesting to note that
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commerce
earned the
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highest


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satisfaction
in all resources.

In terms of
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pre-course
satisfaction,
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commerce
tops in these three subjects, with 95% showing

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satisfaction
. 72% of the
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students
rated the
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pre-course
information of
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law
as ‘
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very
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good
’ and

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the
figure for
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economics
was the least, with
slightly
lass than 60%
being satisfied
with it.

When it
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comes
to teaching, tutor and print resources, approximately equal percentage (95%,

92% and 83%
respectively
) of
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economics
and
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commerce
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students
rated these facilities as
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very


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good
.
However
,
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only
about 70%
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law
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students
were satisfied
with these services.

Turning to other resources, about 80% each of
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commerce
and
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law
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students
were satisfied
,

whereas
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only
60% of
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economics
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students
were satisfied
with other resources.

Overall
, the resources provided by
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commerce
,
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law
and
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economics
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showed
varied popularity

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among
the
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students
.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave “very good” rating to the resources provided by a college, for three courses.

Academic
  American English
12 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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