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Regional Household Recycling Rates

Regional Household Recycling Rates PxaE

The line graph provides information about the percentage of regional household recycling in the United Kingdom (UK), France, and Germany in the years 2005-2015, a 10-year interval. Overall, UK and France showed the highest percentage rate at the end of the period. While France, who rocketed initially manifested the lowest rate throughout the years. France has encountered a peak of 50% in which it was the top percentage in the year 2005. However, a rapid and swift fall from the year 2007 with a rate of approximately 45% declined to about 37% in 2009 and continuously diving to about 28% in 2011. Then it hit the rock bottom in 2013 where it obtained 30%, the reason that caused France to plummet. Even so, a gentle climb to 40% in 2015 has been reached. In 2005, UK and Germany were initially behind France. The UK showed some variations from 40% in 2009, it abruptly increased to about 55% in 2011, and then to approximately 61% in 2015. While Germany demonstrated no fluctuations. It only continued to grow from 20% in 2005 to about 58% in 2015.

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10-year
 interval.

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 of the period. While France, who rocketed initially
 manifested the lowest rate throughout the years.

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 2005. However
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year
 2007 with a rate of approximately 45% declined to about 37% in 2009 and continuously
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, a gentle climb to 40% in 2015 has been reached
.

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 behind France. The UK This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
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 variations from 40% in 2009, it abruptly
 increased to about 55% in 2011, and then to approximately 61% in 2015. While Germany demonstrated no fluctuations. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 continued to grow from 20% in 2005 to about 58% in 2015. 

IELTS academic Regional Household Recycling Rates

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

185 words

6.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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