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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 33pX

The line chart below is been visualized in order to discuss the detailed insights and key features of the average annual expenditures of US consumers' on cell phones and residential phone services during the first decade of the 20th century. Firstly, the cell phone service were as low as 200 dollars in the beginning on 20th century that is in the year 2001. However, the cell phone service gradually increased over the period of time due to its key features such as messaging services, usage of internet from any location and could carry the mobile device to any location unlike residential services. These services helped in the growth of phone service from 200 dollar to almost 800 dollars by end of the decade 2010. Secondly, residential phone services were the only means of communication and was restricted to the residents or workplace in 2001. Moreover, it has a specific plans of monthly payments, unlike the mobile services which had a pre-paid and post paid plan which was comfortable for the consumers. We can observe a decrease in the chart with respect to residential phone services from almost 700 dollars in 2001 to approximately 400 dollars by the end of 2010. The increase and decreased in annual expenditure of consumers' with respect to residential and phone services is because of the flaky idea of phone services and its key features which comparatively put the the phone service ahead in the race of telecommunications which grabbed the attention of conusmers'.

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